Water Issue Essay Link
In the 3rd quarter, we learned Unit 3, water. At the end of the quarter, we had to do a project on the water issues we chose to do, which I chose the topic "Threatened Species- Habitat Destruction- Pink River Dolphin (Amazon)". I wrote an essay, while many of the other students did a presentation. Overall, I think I did a good job. I researched a lot which made my essay very informative, detailed and well explained.
However, there are things I could have done better. First of all, I think I should have explained the problem in a more interesting way. Although I explained it clearly, it wasn't interesting enough. Maybe in the next essay, I should write it more interesting, for example, explaining the physical features of the boto (pink amazon river dolphin). The next improvement I should make next time is to cite all my information. I got a B in citation because I didn't cite some informations, and next time I will have to remember to cite all. However, the overall grade was quite satisfying and next time if I improve in these points I am sure I can get a higher grade.