Friday, April 4, 2014

Reflection on my Water Issue Project

Water Issue Essay Link
In the 3rd quarter, we learned Unit 3, water. At the end of the quarter, we had to do a project on the water issues we chose to do, which I chose the topic "Threatened Species- Habitat Destruction- Pink River Dolphin (Amazon)".  I wrote an essay, while many of the other students did a presentation. Overall, I think I did a good job.  I researched a lot which made my essay very informative, detailed and well explained.
However, there are things I could have done better. First of all, I think I should have explained the problem in a more interesting way. Although I explained it clearly, it wasn't interesting enough. Maybe in the next essay, I should write it more interesting, for example, explaining the physical features of the boto (pink amazon river dolphin). The next improvement I should make next time is to cite all my information. I got a B in citation because I didn't cite some informations, and next time I will have to remember to cite all. However, the overall grade was quite satisfying and next time if I improve in these points I am sure I can get a higher grade.

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